"The story of an hour" , its ending gives me some thoughts. If the herion died because of her husband wasn't dead and she would again have no freedom under male-dominated society, i definitely feel sympathy for the woman's suffering. However, it might be a fatal punishment to the heroin for her extreme happy toward her husband's dead. What's she so happy about without her husband? Could she really be free? Could she able to get right do men have in that period of time? Absoultely no.

"A secrect sorrow" at the middle parts are a little wordy. Although i didn't skip a line, i still feel it gets me bored. The story heroin had already told the story hero that she couldn't bear a baby anymore at the beginning, but the hero showed all his understanding and acceptance no matter of that he would love her and marry her. However, she still kept refused him because of too love him? Also a part is not necessary to tell again that she explain why she couldn't marry the hero. (p.36, first paragraph)